Teh Wozzinator

Name: ZT Age: About 13 Characteristics: Scar over his right eye, strong (comparing to normal super-strength for the experiments). 5'10", long-ish brown hair, brown eyes (kind of like me on ...

Ten Skipping the Planet After Dante called Brandon and arranged his space flight, he drove across Oklahoma to get to Bats, in New Mexico. It was a small, private zone ...

What Bear might become...(because my mom says bears are overdone, even though I can only think of one place they're used) Bear --> The medieval people saw them as noble, ...

The reason I did that is so that I wouldn't run out of character room. And I wanted to say that The Magic of Chocolate is the name of part ...

This is short, so no edits here! Really good... better than I've done yet. I didn't even know you wrote poetry... but as usual, you're awesome. All three of the ...

I'm baaaaaaack!!!!! (lol!) Wow. This was really sweet. Like all of your work. No, really, I like the idea. I also like your wording. The only two edits I have ...

Roflmho! Awesome!!!!! This was seriously funny...

This was so... amazing awesomeness. Nice job. Awesome. Best ad ever!!!! Lol Teh Wozzinator

At first I thought that this was kind of boring... But then I started laughing... And I loved the Bessie part. That cracked me up. And Business man. I don't ...

This is really cool. I can't wait to read more. I think that this has a lot of thought put into it--it's very, very well written. The only edit I ...

Edit: " “Of course,” the Minister said, his grip tensioning." I would just use "tensing" over "tensioning" because it sounds more natural and much better to the reader. Also: "...Are ...

Haha, I really have nothing to say that others haven't. This was really interesting, and it flowed very well. One thing that I don't agree with (no offense meant) is ...

Your rhyming was good, and the poem was okay... Rhythm problem: "Make the right choice. For now I hold the biggest voice." Way off. Change this somehow... Your rhyming is ...

Oh, how true of humans... Make a super-deadly weapon and then sell it to other places so that you can make some money and they can kill your population. They ...

I love the part where the little boy trips and you think he got shot but at the end he gets up and you realize that he just tripped. Especially ...